Merging upstream version 1.66.0+dfsg1.

Signed-off-by: Daniel Baumann <daniel.baumann@progress-linux.org>

1 files changed, 202 insertions, 307 deletions

diff --git a/src/doc/book/nostarch/chapter02.md b/src/doc/book/nostarch/chapter02.md
index b7986c0de..b01770dc5 100644
--- a/src/doc/book/nostarch/chapter02.md
+++ b/src/doc/book/nostarch/chapter02.md
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ directory, so all fixes need to be made in `/src/`.
 Let’s jump into Rust by working through a hands-on project together! This
 chapter introduces you to a few common Rust concepts by showing you how to use
 them in a real program. You’ll learn about `let`, `match`, methods, associated
-functions, using external crates, and more! In the following chapters, we’ll
-explore these ideas in more detail. In this chapter, you’ll practice the
+functions, external crates, and more! In the following chapters, we’ll explore
+these ideas in more detail. In this chapter, you’ll just practice the
 fundamentals.
 
 We’ll implement a classic beginner programming problem: a guessing game. Here’s
@@ -45,14 +45,12 @@ name = "guessing_game"
 version = "0.1.0"
 edition = "2021"
 
-# See more keys and their definitions at https://doc.rust-lang.org/cargo/reference/manifest.html
+# See more keys and their definitions at
+https://doc.rust-lang.org/cargo/reference/manifest.html
 
 [dependencies]
 ```
 
-<!--- We should move to the 2021 edition. /JT --->
-<!-- Totally right, done! /Carol -->
-
 As you saw in Chapter 1, `cargo new` generates a “Hello, world!” program for
 you. Check out the *src/main.rs* file:
 
@@ -108,27 +106,21 @@ fn main() {
 }
 ```
 
-<!--- Style question, should we switch to the more recent style of:
-```
-    println!("You guessed: {guess}");
-```
-/JT --->
-<!-- Good call, I'll switch these throughout as I edit after TR. /Carol -->
-
 Listing 2-1: Code that gets a guess from the user and prints it
 
 This code contains a lot of information, so let’s go over it line by line. To
 obtain user input and then print the result as output, we need to bring the
-`io` input/output library into scope. The `io` library comes from the
-standard library, known as `std`:
+`io` input/output library into scope. The `io` library comes from the standard
+library, known as `std`:
 
 ```
 use std::io;
 ```
 
-By default, Rust has a set of items defined in the standard library that it brings
-into the scope of every program. This set is called the *prelude*, and you can
-see everything in it at *https://doc.rust-lang.org/std/prelude/index.html*.
+By default, Rust has a set of items defined in the standard library that it
+brings into the scope of every program. This set is called the *prelude*, and
+you can see everything in it at
+*https://doc.rust-lang.org/std/prelude/index.html*.
 
 If a type you want to use isn’t in the prelude, you have to bring that type
 into scope explicitly with a `use` statement. Using the `std::io` library
@@ -142,21 +134,16 @@ program:
 fn main() {
 ```
 
-The `fn` syntax declares a new function, the parentheses, `()`, indicate there
-are no parameters, and the curly bracket, `{`, starts the body of the function.
+The `fn` syntax declares a new function; the parentheses, `()`, indicate there
+are no parameters; and the curly bracket, `{`, starts the body of the function.
 
 As you also learned in Chapter 1, `println!` is a macro that prints a string to
 the screen:
 
-<!--- Not sure if we want to go into it just yet, but `println!` formats a string
-and then prints the resulting string to stdout (which is often, but not always
-the screen). /JT --->
-<!-- Yeah, I want to gloss over that for now. Leaving this as-is. /Carol -->
-
 ```
-    println!("Guess the number!");
+println!("Guess the number!");
 
-    println!("Please input your guess.");
+println!("Please input your guess.");
 ```
 
 This code is printing a prompt stating what the game is and requesting input
@@ -167,7 +154,7 @@ from the user.
 Next, we’ll create a *variable* to store the user input, like this:
 
 ```
-    let mut guess = String::new();
+let mut guess = String::new();
 ```
 
 Now the program is getting interesting! There’s a lot going on in this little
@@ -179,15 +166,9 @@ let apples = 5;
 
 This line creates a new variable named `apples` and binds it to the value 5. In
 Rust, variables are immutable by default, meaning once we give the variable a
-value, the value won't change. We’ll be discussing this concept in detail in
-the “Variables and Mutability” section in Chapter 3. To make a variable
-mutable, we add `mut` before the variable name:
-
-<!--- Do we want to give a quick word about what "mutable" means? Folks who grab
-this book but aren't familiar with some of the technical programming language terms
-might need something like "variable are immutable by default, meaning once we give
-the variable its value, it won't change". /JT --->
-<!-- Sounds good, made that change /Carol -->
+value, the value won’t change. We’ll be discussing this concept in detail in
+“Variables and Mutability” on page XX. To make a variable mutable, we add `mut`
+before the variable name:
 
 ```
 let apples = 5; // immutable
@@ -195,12 +176,12 @@ let mut bananas = 5; // mutable
 ```
 
 > Note: The `//` syntax starts a comment that continues until the end of the
-> line. Rust ignores everything in comments. We’ll discuss comments in more
-> detail in Chapter 3.
+line. Rust ignores everything in comments. We’ll discuss comments in more
+detail in Chapter 3.
 
 Returning to the guessing game program, you now know that `let mut guess` will
 introduce a mutable variable named `guess`. The equal sign (`=`) tells Rust we
-want to bind something to the variable now. On the right of the equals sign is
+want to bind something to the variable now. On the right of the equal sign is
 the value that `guess` is bound to, which is the result of calling
 `String::new`, a function that returns a new instance of a `String`. `String`
 is a string type provided by the standard library that is a growable, UTF-8
@@ -209,15 +190,9 @@ encoded bit of text.
 The `::` syntax in the `::new` line indicates that `new` is an associated
 function of the `String` type. An *associated function* is a function that’s
 implemented on a type, in this case `String`. This `new` function creates a
-new, empty string. You’ll find a `new` function on many types, because it’s a
+new, empty string. You’ll find a `new` function on many types because it’s a
 common name for a function that makes a new value of some kind.
 
-<!--- For some readers, we might want to say "If you've used languages with
-static methods, associated function work very similarly" or something along
-those lines. /JT --->
-<!-- I don't think that's helpful enough for all readers to include here, given
-that we're trying to make the book mostly background-agnostic. /Carol -->
-
 In full, the `let mut guess = String::new();` line has created a mutable
 variable that is currently bound to a new, empty instance of a `String`. Whew!
 
@@ -229,11 +204,11 @@ the `stdin` function from the `io` module, which will allow us to handle user
 input:
 
 ```
-    io::stdin()
-        .read_line(&mut guess)
+io::stdin()
+    .read_line(&mut guess)
 ```
 
-If we hadn’t imported the `io` library with `use std::io` at the beginning of
+If we hadn’t imported the `io` library with `use std::io;` at the beginning of
 the program, we could still use the function by writing this function call as
 `std::io::stdin`. The `stdin` function returns an instance of `std::io::Stdin`,
 which is a type that represents a handle to the standard input for your
@@ -252,27 +227,19 @@ let multiple parts of your code access one piece of data without needing to
 copy that data into memory multiple times. References are a complex feature,
 and one of Rust’s major advantages is how safe and easy it is to use
 references. You don’t need to know a lot of those details to finish this
-program. For now, all you need to know is that like variables, references are
+program. For now, all you need to know is that, like variables, references are
 immutable by default. Hence, you need to write `&mut guess` rather than
 `&guess` to make it mutable. (Chapter 4 will explain references more
 thoroughly.)
 
-### Handling Potential Failure with the `Result` Type
+### Handling Potential Failure with Result
 
 We’re still working on this line of code. We’re now discussing a third line of
 text, but note that it’s still part of a single logical line of code. The next
 part is this method:
 
-<!--- in the program this is the second line of code -- do you mean the third
-section of this line? -->
-<!-- This is still discussing the code in Listing 2-1, and is going to talk
-about the third line, if you're counting the lines of the page, of this logical
-line of code, where logical lines of code are ended with semicolons. Do you
-have suggestions on how to make that clearer? /Carol -->
-<!--- Ashley, does this all track now? /LC --->
-
 ```
-        .expect("Failed to read line");
+.expect("Failed to read line");
 ```
 
 We could have written this code as:
@@ -291,17 +258,10 @@ we pass to it, but it also returns a `Result` value. `Result` is an
 *enumeration*, often called an *enum*, which is a type that can be in one of
 multiple possible states. We call each possible state a *variant*.
 
-<!--- Typo above: possibilities /JT --->
-<!--- Personally, I think the above paragraph might be introducing a little too
-much all at once. You might be able to shorten it to: "`Result` is an *enumeration*,
-often called an *enum*, which is a type that can be in one of multiple possible
-states. We call each possible state a *variant*. /JT --->
-<!-- I like it, made that change /Carol -->
-
 Chapter 6 will cover enums in more detail. The purpose of these `Result` types
 is to encode error-handling information.
 
-`Result`'s variants are `Ok` and `Err`. The `Ok` variant indicates the
+`Result`’s variants are `Ok` and `Err`. The `Ok` variant indicates the
 operation was successful, and inside `Ok` is the successfully generated value.
 The `Err` variant means the operation failed, and `Err` contains information
 about how or why the operation failed.
@@ -337,38 +297,36 @@ warning: `guessing_game` (bin "guessing_game") generated 1 warning
 Rust warns that you haven’t used the `Result` value returned from `read_line`,
 indicating that the program hasn’t handled a possible error.
 
-The right way to suppress the warning is to actually write error handling, but
-in our case we just want to crash this program when a problem occurs, so we can
-use `expect`. You’ll learn about recovering from errors in Chapter 9.
+The right way to suppress the warning is to actually write error-handling code,
+but in our case we just want to crash this program when a problem occurs, so we
+can use `expect`. You’ll learn about recovering from errors in Chapter 9.
 
-### Printing Values with `println!` Placeholders
+### Printing Values with println! Placeholders
 
 Aside from the closing curly bracket, there’s only one more line to discuss in
 the code so far:
 
 ```
-    println!("You guessed: {guess}");
+println!("You guessed: {guess}");
 ```
 
-<!--- Ditto with using the `{guess}` style in this line. /JT --->
-
 This line prints the string that now contains the user’s input. The `{}` set of
 curly brackets is a placeholder: think of `{}` as little crab pincers that hold
-a value in place. You can print more than one value using curly brackets: the
-first set of curly brackets holds the first value listed after the format
-string, the second set holds the second value, and so on. Printing multiple
-values in one call to `println!` would look like this:
+a value in place. When printing the value of a variable, the variable name can
+go inside the curly brackets. When printing the result of evaluating an
+expression, place empty curly brackets in the format string, then follow the
+format string with a comma-separated list of expressions to print in each empty
+curly bracket placeholder in the same order. Printing a variable and the result
+of an expression in one call to `println!` would look like this:
 
 ```
 let x = 5;
 let y = 10;
 
-println!("x = {x} and y = {y}");
+println!("x = {x} and y + 2 = {}", y + 2);
 ```
-<!--- And `println!("x = {x} and y = {y}");` in this example. /JT --->
-<!-- Done! /Carol -->
 
-This code would print `x = 5 and y = 10`.
+This code would print `x = 5 and y = 12`.
 
 ### Testing the First Part
 
@@ -401,43 +359,36 @@ library. However, the Rust team does provide a `rand` crate at
 
 Remember that a crate is a collection of Rust source code files. The project
 we’ve been building is a *binary crate*, which is an executable. The `rand`
-crate is a *library crate*, which contains code intended to be used in other
-programs and can't be executed on its own.
-
-<!--- Nit: ", and" followed by incomplete sentence. /JT --->
-<!-- Fixed /Carol -->
+crate is a *library crate*, which contains code that is intended to be used in
+other programs and can’t be executed on its own.
 
 Cargo’s coordination of external crates is where Cargo really shines. Before we
 can write code that uses `rand`, we need to modify the *Cargo.toml* file to
 include the `rand` crate as a dependency. Open that file now and add the
-following line to the bottom beneath the `[dependencies]` section header that
+following line to the bottom, beneath the `[dependencies]` section header that
 Cargo created for you. Be sure to specify `rand` exactly as we have here, with
-this version number, or the code examples in this tutorial may not work.
+this version number, or the code examples in this tutorial may not work:
 
 Filename: Cargo.toml
 
 ```
-rand = "0.8.3"
+[dependencies]
+rand = "0.8.5"
 ```
-<!--- 0.8.5 is the current latest. /JT --->
-<!-- I will update this version to whatever is latest once we're in Word; there
-could be another version between now and then. If it's another 0.8.x version,
-it doesn't really matter in any case. /Carol -->
 
 In the *Cargo.toml* file, everything that follows a header is part of that
 section that continues until another section starts. In `[dependencies]` you
 tell Cargo which external crates your project depends on and which versions of
 those crates you require. In this case, we specify the `rand` crate with the
-semantic version specifier `0.8.3`. Cargo understands Semantic Versioning
+semantic version specifier `0.8.5`. Cargo understands Semantic Versioning
 (sometimes called *SemVer*), which is a standard for writing version numbers.
-The number `0.8.3` is actually shorthand for `^0.8.3`, which means any version
-that is at least `0.8.3` but below `0.9.0`.
+The specifier `0.8.5` is actually shorthand for `^0.8.5`, which means any
+version that is at least 0.8.5 but below 0.9.0.
 
 Cargo considers these versions to have public APIs compatible with version
-`0.8.3`, and this specification ensures you’ll get the latest patch release
-that will still compile with the code in this chapter. Any version `0.9.0` or
-greater is not guaranteed to have the same API as what the following examples
-use.
+0.8.5, and this specification ensures you’ll get the latest patch release that
+will still compile with the code in this chapter. Any version 0.9.0 or greater
+is not guaranteed to have the same API as what the following examples use.
 
 Now, without changing any of the code, let’s build the project, as shown in
 Listing 2-2.
@@ -445,48 +396,34 @@ Listing 2-2.
 ```
 $ cargo build
     Updating crates.io index
-  Downloaded rand v0.8.3
-  Downloaded libc v0.2.86
-  Downloaded getrandom v0.2.2
+  Downloaded rand v0.8.5
+  Downloaded libc v0.2.127
+  Downloaded getrandom v0.2.7
   Downloaded cfg-if v1.0.0
-  Downloaded ppv-lite86 v0.2.10
-  Downloaded rand_chacha v0.3.0
-  Downloaded rand_core v0.6.2
-   Compiling rand_core v0.6.2
-   Compiling libc v0.2.86
-   Compiling getrandom v0.2.2
-   Compiling cfg-if v1.0.0
-   Compiling ppv-lite86 v0.2.10
-   Compiling rand_chacha v0.3.0
-   Compiling rand v0.8.3
-   Compiling guessing_game v0.1.0 (file:///projects/guessing_game)
-    Finished dev [unoptimized + debuginfo] target(s) in 2.53s
-```
-<!--- If we feel like refreshing this, here's what I saw today:
-
+  Downloaded ppv-lite86 v0.2.16
+  Downloaded rand_chacha v0.3.1
+  Downloaded rand_core v0.6.3
+   Compiling rand_core v0.6.3
+   Compiling libc v0.2.127
+   Compiling getrandom v0.2.7
    Compiling cfg-if v1.0.0
    Compiling ppv-lite86 v0.2.16
-   Compiling libc v0.2.120
-   Compiling getrandom v0.2.5
-   Compiling rand_core v0.6.3
    Compiling rand_chacha v0.3.1
    Compiling rand v0.8.5
-   Compiling guessing_game v0.1.0 (/Users/jt/Source/book/guessing_game)
-    Finished dev [unoptimized + debuginfo] target(s) in 1.50s
-
-/JT --->
-<!-- I will refresh this when we're in Word /Carol -->
+   Compiling guessing_game v0.1.0 (file:///projects/guessing_game)
+    Finished dev [unoptimized + debuginfo] target(s) in 2.53s
+```
 
-Listing 2-2: The output from running `cargo build` after adding the rand crate
-as a dependency
+Listing 2-2: The output from running `cargo build` after adding the `rand`
+crate as a dependency
 
 You may see different version numbers (but they will all be compatible with the
-code, thanks to SemVer!), different lines (depending on the operating system),
-and the lines may be in a different order.
+code, thanks to SemVer!) and different lines (depending on the operating
+system), and the lines may be in a different order.
 
 When we include an external dependency, Cargo fetches the latest versions of
 everything that dependency needs from the *registry*, which is a copy of data
-from Crates.io at *https://crates.io/*. Crates.io is where people in the Rust
+from Crates.io at *https://crates.io*. Crates.io is where people in the Rust
 ecosystem post their open source Rust projects for others to use.
 
 After updating the registry, Cargo checks the `[dependencies]` section and
@@ -502,8 +439,8 @@ about them in your *Cargo.toml* file. Cargo also knows that you haven’t change
 anything about your code, so it doesn’t recompile that either. With nothing to
 do, it simply exits.
 
-If you open up the *src/main.rs* file, make a trivial change, and then save it
-and build again, you’ll only see two lines of output:
+If you open the *src/main.rs* file, make a trivial change, and then save it and
+build again, you’ll only see two lines of output:
 
 ```
 $ cargo build
@@ -511,42 +448,30 @@ $ cargo build
     Finished dev [unoptimized + debuginfo] target(s) in 2.53 secs
 ```
 
-These lines show Cargo only updates the build with your tiny change to the
+These lines show that Cargo only updates the build with your tiny change to the
 *src/main.rs* file. Your dependencies haven’t changed, so Cargo knows it can
 reuse what it has already downloaded and compiled for those.
 
-#### Ensuring Reproducible Builds with the *Cargo.lock* File
+#### Ensuring Reproducible Builds with the Cargo.lock File
 
 Cargo has a mechanism that ensures you can rebuild the same artifact every time
 you or anyone else builds your code: Cargo will use only the versions of the
 dependencies you specified until you indicate otherwise. For example, say that
-next week version 0.8.4 of the `rand` crate comes out, and that version
+next week version 0.8.6 of the `rand` crate comes out, and that version
 contains an important bug fix, but it also contains a regression that will
 break your code. To handle this, Rust creates the *Cargo.lock* file the first
 time you run `cargo build`, so we now have this in the *guessing_game*
 directory.
 
-<!--- If we bump version numbers, we should bump above and below also. /JT --->
-<!-- Yup, will do in Word! /Carol -->
-
-When you build a project for the first time, Cargo figures out all the
-versions of the dependencies that fit the criteria and then writes them to
-the *Cargo.lock* file. When you build your project in the future, Cargo will
-see that the *Cargo.lock* file exists and use the versions specified there
+When you build a project for the first time, Cargo figures out all the versions
+of the dependencies that fit the criteria and then writes them to the
+*Cargo.lock* file. When you build your project in the future, Cargo will see
+that the *Cargo.lock* file exists and will use the versions specified there
 rather than doing all the work of figuring out versions again. This lets you
 have a reproducible build automatically. In other words, your project will
-remain at `0.8.3` until you explicitly upgrade, thanks to the *Cargo.lock*
-file. Because the *Cargo.lock* file is important for reproducible builds, it's
-often checked into source control with the rest of the code in your project.
-
-<!--- We could mention that because Cargo.lock is important for reproducible
-builds, they're often checked into source control alongside the Cargo.toml and
-the rest of the code of your project. /JT --->
-<!-- Liz, is this sentence ok even though we don't really talk about source
-control or what it is anywhere else in the book? I don't really want to get
-into it, but at this point I think it's a fair assumption that developers know
-what "source control" is. If you disagree, this sentence can come back out.
-/Carol -->
+remain at 0.8.5 until you explicitly upgrade, thanks to the *Cargo.lock* file.
+Because the *Cargo.lock* file is important for reproducible builds, it’s often
+checked into source control with the rest of the code in your project.
 
 #### Updating a Crate to Get a New Version
 
@@ -554,24 +479,20 @@ When you *do* want to update a crate, Cargo provides the command `update`,
 which will ignore the *Cargo.lock* file and figure out all the latest versions
 that fit your specifications in *Cargo.toml*. Cargo will then write those
 versions to the *Cargo.lock* file. Otherwise, by default, Cargo will only look
-for versions greater than `0.8.3` and less than `0.9.0`. If the `rand` crate
-has released the two new versions `0.8.4` and `0.9.0` you would see the
-following if you ran `cargo update`:
+for versions greater than 0.8.5 and less than 0.9.0. If the `rand` crate has
+released the two new versions 0.8.6 and 0.9.0, you would see the following if
+you ran `cargo update`:
 
 ```
 $ cargo update
     Updating crates.io index
-    Updating rand v0.8.3 -> v0.8.4
+    Updating rand v0.8.5 -> v0.8.6
 ```
 
-Cargo ignores the `0.9.0` release. At this point, you would also notice a
-change in your *Cargo.lock* file noting that the version of the `rand` crate
-you are now using is `0.8.4`. To use `rand` version `0.9.0` or any version in
-the `0.9.x` series, you’d have to update the *Cargo.toml* file to look like
-this instead:
-
-<!--- Typo first line: release. /JT --->
-<!-- Fixed /Carol -->
+Cargo ignores the 0.9.0 release. At this point, you would also notice a change
+in your *Cargo.lock* file noting that the version of the `rand` crate you are
+now using is 0.8.6. To use `rand` version 0.9.0 or any version in the 0.9.*x*
+series, you’d have to update the *Cargo.toml* file to look like this instead:
 
 ```
 [dependencies]
@@ -582,7 +503,7 @@ The next time you run `cargo build`, Cargo will update the registry of crates
 available and reevaluate your `rand` requirements according to the new version
 you have specified.
 
-There’s a lot more to say about Cargo and its ecosystem which we’ll discuss in
+There’s a lot more to say about Cargo and its ecosystem, which we’ll discuss in
 Chapter 14, but for now, that’s all you need to know. Cargo makes it very easy
 to reuse libraries, so Rustaceans are able to write smaller projects that are
 assembled from a number of packages.
@@ -596,14 +517,14 @@ Filename: src/main.rs
 
 ```
 use std::io;
-[1]use rand::Rng;
+1 use rand::Rng;
 
 fn main() {
     println!("Guess the number!");
 
-  [2] let secret_number = rand::thread_rng().gen_range(1..=100);
+  2 let secret_number = rand::thread_rng().gen_range(1..=100);
 
-  [3] println!("The secret number is: {secret_number}");
+  3 println!("The secret number is: {secret_number}");
 
     println!("Please input your guess.");
 
@@ -617,50 +538,35 @@ fn main() {
 }
 ```
 
-<!--- Same style suggestion re: `{secret_number}`. /JT --->
-<!--- Thought: for first-time readability, we could use `1..=100` in the above
-and let people know later this is equivalent to `1..101` later. We say a number
-between 1 and 100, so we could show the syntax equivalent of that description.
-/JT --->
-<!-- I'm into both these suggestions! /Carol -->
-
 Listing 2-3: Adding code to generate a random number
 
-<!--- I can't remember how we handled wingdings in markdown before... I don't
-have those files on this machine. I've just used [x] for now, does that work?
-Then we'll replace them when we convert to Word /LC --->
-<!-- I don't think we added the wingdings at all until we moved to Word. For
-code listings that are the same as the last printing version, I'd definitely
-like to keep the wingdings the way they were. Using the brackets with numbers
-as you have here works fine! /Carol -->
-
-First, we add the line `use rand::Rng` [1]. The `Rng` trait defines methods
+First we add the line `use rand::Rng;` [1]. The `Rng` trait defines methods
 that random number generators implement, and this trait must be in scope for us
 to use those methods. Chapter 10 will cover traits in detail.
 
 Next, we’re adding two lines in the middle. In the first line [2], we call the
 `rand::thread_rng` function that gives us the particular random number
-generator that we’re going to use: one that is local to the current thread of
-execution and seeded by the operating system. Then we call the `gen_range`
+generator we’re going to use: one that is local to the current thread of
+execution and is seeded by the operating system. Then we call the `gen_range`
 method on the random number generator. This method is defined by the `Rng`
-trait that we brought into scope with the `use rand::Rng` statement. The
+trait that we brought into scope with the `use rand::Rng;` statement. The
 `gen_range` method takes a range expression as an argument and generates a
 random number in the range. The kind of range expression we’re using here takes
 the form `start..=end` and is inclusive on the lower and upper bounds, so we
 need to specify `1..=100` to request a number between 1 and 100.
 
 > Note: You won’t just know which traits to use and which methods and functions
-> to call from a crate, so each crate has documentation with instructions for
-> using it. Another neat feature of Cargo is that running the `cargo
-> doc --open` command will build documentation provided by all of your
-> dependencies locally and open it in your browser. If you’re interested in
-> other functionality in the `rand` crate, for example, run `cargo doc --open`
-> and click `rand` in the sidebar on the left.
-
-The second new line [3] prints the secret number. This is useful while
-we’re developing the program to be able to test it, but we’ll delete it from
-the final version. It’s not much of a game if the program prints the answer as
-soon as it starts!
+to call from a crate, so each crate has documentation with instructions for
+using it. Another neat feature of Cargo is that running the `cargo doc --open`
+command will build documentation provided by all your dependencies locally and
+open it in your browser. If you’re interested in other functionality in the
+`rand` crate, for example, run `cargo doc --open` and click `rand` in the
+sidebar on the left.
+
+The second new line [3] prints the secret number. This is useful while we’re
+developing the program to be able to test it, but we’ll delete it from the
+final version. It’s not much of a game if the program prints the answer as soon
+as it starts!
 
 Try running the program a few times:
 
@@ -691,22 +597,22 @@ You should get different random numbers, and they should all be numbers between
 ## Comparing the Guess to the Secret Number
 
 Now that we have user input and a random number, we can compare them. That step
-is shown in Listing 2-4. Note that this code won’t compile quite yet, as we
-will explain.
+is shown in Listing 2-4. Note that this code won’t compile just yet, as we will
+explain.
 
 Filename: src/main.rs
 
 ```
 use rand::Rng;
-[1]use std::cmp::Ordering;
+1 use std::cmp::Ordering;
 use std::io;
 
 fn main() {
-    // --snip--
+    --snip--
 
     println!("You guessed: {guess}");
 
-    match[2] guess.cmp(&secret_number)[3] {
+  2 match guess.3 cmp(&secret_number) {
         Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
         Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
         Ordering::Equal => println!("You win!"),
@@ -724,7 +630,7 @@ the three outcomes that are possible when you compare two values.
 Then we add five new lines at the bottom that use the `Ordering` type. The
 `cmp` method [3] compares two values and can be called on anything that can be
 compared. It takes a reference to whatever you want to compare with: here it’s
-comparing the `guess` to the `secret_number`. Then it returns a variant of the
+comparing `guess` to `secret_number`. Then it returns a variant of the
 `Ordering` enum we brought into scope with the `use` statement. We use a
 `match` expression [2] to decide what to do next based on which variant of
 `Ordering` was returned from the call to `cmp` with the values in `guess` and
@@ -734,14 +640,16 @@ A `match` expression is made up of *arms*. An arm consists of a *pattern* to
 match against, and the code that should be run if the value given to `match`
 fits that arm’s pattern. Rust takes the value given to `match` and looks
 through each arm’s pattern in turn. Patterns and the `match` construct are
-powerful Rust features that let you express a variety of situations your code
-might encounter and make sure that you handle them all. These features will be
+powerful Rust features: they let you express a variety of situations your code
+might encounter and they make sure you handle them all. These features will be
 covered in detail in Chapter 6 and Chapter 18, respectively.
 
 Let’s walk through an example with the `match` expression we use here. Say that
 the user has guessed 50 and the randomly generated secret number this time is
-38. When the code compares 50 to 38, the `cmp` method will return
-`Ordering::Greater`, because 50 is greater than 38. The `match` expression gets
+38.
+
+When the code compares 50 to 38, the `cmp` method will return
+`Ordering::Greater` because 50 is greater than 38. The `match` expression gets
 the `Ordering::Greater` value and starts checking each arm’s pattern. It looks
 at the first arm’s pattern, `Ordering::Less`, and sees that the value
 `Ordering::Greater` does not match `Ordering::Less`, so it ignores the code in
@@ -751,11 +659,6 @@ code in that arm will execute and print `Too big!` to the screen. The `match`
 expression ends after the first successful match, so it won’t look at the last
 arm in this scenario.
 
-<!--- Since `match` always ends after the first successful match, we might want
-to just say that directly: "The `match` expression ends after the first successful
-match, so it won't look at the last arm in this scenario". /JT --->
-<!-- Sounds good, done! /Carol -->
-
 However, the code in Listing 2-4 won’t compile yet. Let’s try it:
 
 ```
@@ -782,85 +685,79 @@ an `i32`, which is the type of `secret_number` unless you add type information
 elsewhere that would cause Rust to infer a different numerical type. The reason
 for the error is that Rust cannot compare a string and a number type.
 
-<!--- Typo: Unless otherwise specified. /JT --->
-<!-- Fixed /Carol -->
-
 Ultimately, we want to convert the `String` the program reads as input into a
-real number type so we can compare it numerically to the secret number. We do so
-by adding this line to the `main` function body:
+real number type so we can compare it numerically to the secret number. We do
+so by adding this line to the `main` function body:
 
 Filename: src/main.rs
 
 ```
-    // --snip--
+--snip--
 
-    let mut guess = String::new();
+let mut guess = String::new();
 
-    io::stdin()
-        .read_line(&mut guess)
-        .expect("Failed to read line");
+io::stdin()
+    .read_line(&mut guess)
+    .expect("Failed to read line");
 
-    let guess: u32 = guess.trim().parse().expect("Please type a number!");
+let guess: u32 = guess
+    .trim()
+    .parse()
+    .expect("Please type a number!");
 
-    println!("You guessed: {guess}");
+println!("You guessed: {guess}");
 
-    match guess.cmp(&secret_number) {
-        Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
-        Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
-        Ordering::Equal => println!("You win!"),
-    }
+match guess.cmp(&secret_number) {
+    Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
+    Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
+    Ordering::Equal => println!("You win!"),
+}
 ```
 
 We create a variable named `guess`. But wait, doesn’t the program already have
-a variable named `guess`? It does, but helpfully Rust allows us to *shadow* the
-previous value of `guess` with a new one. Shadowing lets us reuse the `guess`
+a variable named `guess`? It does, but helpfully Rust allows us to shadow the
+previous value of `guess` with a new one. *Shadowing* lets us reuse the `guess`
 variable name rather than forcing us to create two unique variables, such as
-`guess_str` and `guess` for example. We’ll cover this in more detail in Chapter
-3, but for now know that this feature is often used when you want to convert a
-value from one type to another type.
+`guess_str` and `guess`, for example. We’ll cover this in more detail in
+Chapter 3, but for now, know that this feature is often used when you want to
+convert a value from one type to another type.
 
 We bind this new variable to the expression `guess.trim().parse()`. The `guess`
 in the expression refers to the original `guess` variable that contained the
 input as a string. The `trim` method on a `String` instance will eliminate any
 whitespace at the beginning and end, which we must do to be able to compare the
 string to the `u32`, which can only contain numerical data. The user must press
-<span class="keystroke">enter</span> to satisfy `read_line` and input their
-guess, which adds a newline character to the string. For example, if the user
-types <span class="keystroke">5</span> and presses <span
-class="keystroke">enter</span>, `guess` looks like this: `5\n`. The `\n`
-represents “newline”. (On Windows, pressing <span
-class="keystroke">enter</span> results in a carriage return and a newline,
-`\r\n`). The `trim` method eliminates `\n` or `\r\n`, resulting in just `5`.
+enter to satisfy `read_line` and input their guess, which adds a newline
+character to the string. For example, if the user types `5` and presses enter,
+`guess` looks like this: `5\n`. The `\n` represents “newline.” (On Windows,
+pressing enter results in a carriage return and a newline, `\r\n`.) The `trim`
+method eliminates `\n` or `\r\n`, resulting in just `5`.
 
 The `parse` method on strings converts a string to another type. Here, we use
 it to convert from a string to a number. We need to tell Rust the exact number
 type we want by using `let guess: u32`. The colon (`:`) after `guess` tells
 Rust we’ll annotate the variable’s type. Rust has a few built-in number types;
 the `u32` seen here is an unsigned, 32-bit integer. It’s a good default choice
-for a small positive number. You’ll learn about other number types in Chapter
-3. Additionally, the `u32` annotation in this example program and the
-comparison with `secret_number` means that Rust will infer that `secret_number`
-should be a `u32` as well. So now the comparison will be between two values of
-the same type!
+for a small positive number. You’ll learn about other number types in Chapter 3.
 
-<!--- More correct to say "The `parse` method converts a string to another type.
-Here, we use it to convert from a string to a number." You can use `parse` to
-convert to non-numeric types also. /JT --->
-<!-- Great catch, fixed! /Carol -->
+Additionally, the `u32` annotation in this example program and the comparison
+with `secret_number` means Rust will infer that `secret_number` should be a
+`u32` as well. So now the comparison will be between two values of the same
+type!
 
 The `parse` method will only work on characters that can logically be converted
 into numbers and so can easily cause errors. If, for example, the string
-contained `A👍%`, there would be no way to convert that to a number. Because it
-might fail, the `parse` method returns a `Result` type, much as the `read_line`
-method does (discussed earlier in “Handling Potential Failure with the `Result`
-Type”). We’ll treat this `Result` the same way by using the `expect` method
-again. If `parse` returns an `Err` `Result` variant because it couldn’t create
-a number from the string, the `expect` call will crash the game and print the
-message we give it. If `parse` can successfully convert the string to a number,
-it will return the `Ok` variant of `Result`, and `expect` will return the
-number that we want from the `Ok` value.
+contained `A`👍`%`, there would be no way to convert that to a number. Because
+it might fail, the `parse` method returns a `Result` type, much as the
+`read_line` method does (discussed earlier in “Handling Potential Failure with
+Result” on page XX). We’ll treat this `Result` the same way by using the
+`expect` method again. If `parse` returns an `Err` `Result` variant because it
+couldn’t create a number from the string, the `expect` call will crash the game
+and print the message we give it. If `parse` can successfully convert the
+string to a number, it will return the `Ok` variant of `Result`, and `expect`
+will return the number that we want from the `Ok` value.
 
-Let’s run the program now!
+Let’s run the program now:
 
 ```
 $ cargo run
@@ -891,20 +788,19 @@ more chances at guessing the number:
 Filename: src/main.rs
 
 ```
-    // --snip--
+--snip--
 
-    println!("The secret number is: {secret_number}");
+println!("The secret number is: {secret_number}");
 
-    loop {
-        println!("Please input your guess.");
+loop {
+    println!("Please input your guess.");
 
-        // --snip--
+    --snip--
 
-        match guess.cmp(&secret_number) {
-            Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
-            Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
-            Ordering::Equal => println!("You win!"),
-        }
+    match guess.cmp(&secret_number) {
+        Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
+        Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
+        Ordering::Equal => println!("You win!"),
     }
 }
 ```
@@ -915,11 +811,10 @@ and run the program again. The program will now ask for another guess forever,
 which actually introduces a new problem. It doesn’t seem like the user can quit!
 
 The user could always interrupt the program by using the keyboard shortcut
-<span class="keystroke">ctrl-c</span>. But there’s another way to escape this
-insatiable monster, as mentioned in the `parse` discussion in “Comparing the
-Guess to the Secret Number”: if the user enters a non-number answer, the
-program will crash. We can take advantage of that to allow the user to quit, as
-shown here:
+ctrl-C. But there’s another way to escape this insatiable monster, as mentioned
+in the `parse` discussion in “Comparing the Guess to the Secret Number” on page
+XX: if the user enters a non-number answer, the program will crash. We can take
+advantage of that to allow the user to quit, as shown here:
 
 ```
 $ cargo run
@@ -942,12 +837,13 @@ You guessed: 59
 You win!
 Please input your guess.
 quit
-thread 'main' panicked at 'Please type a number!: ParseIntError { kind: InvalidDigit }', src/main.rs:28:47
+thread 'main' panicked at 'Please type a number!: ParseIntError
+{ kind: InvalidDigit }', src/main.rs:28:47
 note: run with `RUST_BACKTRACE=1` environment variable to display a backtrace
 ```
 
-Typing `quit` will quit the game, but as you’ll notice so will entering any
-other non-number input. This is suboptimal to say the least; we want the game
+Typing `quit` will quit the game, but as you’ll notice, so will entering any
+other non-number input. This is suboptimal, to say the least; we want the game
 to also stop when the correct number is guessed.
 
 ### Quitting After a Correct Guess
@@ -957,16 +853,14 @@ Let’s program the game to quit when the user wins by adding a `break` statemen
 Filename: src/main.rs
 
 ```
-        // --snip--
+--snip--
 
-        match guess.cmp(&secret_number) {
-            Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
-            Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
-            Ordering::Equal => {
-                println!("You win!");
-                break;
-            }
-        }
+match guess.cmp(&secret_number) {
+    Ordering::Less => println!("Too small!"),
+    Ordering::Greater => println!("Too big!"),
+    Ordering::Equal => {
+        println!("You win!");
+        break;
     }
 }
 ```
@@ -985,20 +879,20 @@ is converted from a `String` to a `u32`, as shown in Listing 2-5.
 Filename: src/main.rs
 
 ```
-        // --snip--
+--snip--
 
-        io::stdin()
-            .read_line(&mut guess)
-            .expect("Failed to read line");
+io::stdin()
+    .read_line(&mut guess)
+    .expect("Failed to read line");
 
-        let guess: u32 = match guess.trim().parse() {
-            Ok(num) => num,
-            Err(_) => continue,
-        };
+let guess: u32 = match guess.trim().parse() {
+    Ok(num) => num,
+    Err(_) => continue,
+};
 
-        println!("You guessed: {guess}");
+println!("You guessed: {guess}");
 
-        // --snip--
+--snip--
 ```
 
 Listing 2-5: Ignoring a non-number guess and asking for another guess instead
@@ -1011,7 +905,7 @@ a `match` expression here, as we did with the `Ordering` result of the `cmp`
 method.
 
 If `parse` is able to successfully turn the string into a number, it will
-return an `Ok` value that contains the resulting number. That `Ok` value will
+return an `Ok` value that contains the resultant number. That `Ok` value will
 match the first arm’s pattern, and the `match` expression will just return the
 `num` value that `parse` produced and put inside the `Ok` value. That number
 will end up right where we want it in the new `guess` variable we’re creating.
@@ -1098,10 +992,10 @@ fn main() {
 
 Listing 2-6: Complete guessing game code
 
-## Summary
-
 At this point, you’ve successfully built the guessing game. Congratulations!
 
+## Summary
+
 This project was a hands-on way to introduce you to many new Rust concepts:
 `let`, `match`, functions, the use of external crates, and more. In the next
 few chapters, you’ll learn about these concepts in more detail. Chapter 3
@@ -1109,3 +1003,4 @@ covers concepts that most programming languages have, such as variables, data
 types, and functions, and shows how to use them in Rust. Chapter 4 explores
 ownership, a feature that makes Rust different from other languages. Chapter 5
 discusses structs and method syntax, and Chapter 6 explains how enums work.
+